RS4 Episode of Bikini Driving School

[craiglieberman]

Ahem...flame suit on...

Would love to hear your feedback on this show...it is a weekly show I produce for a client and this week's show features my RS4.

I am most interested in your feedback about the structure of the show, what should be added, what should be skipped for future shows.

Constructive criticism appreciated. Comments about the girls being fat or ugly must include pictures of your own significant other ;-)

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[rmarin2]

[Bob W.]

here's what I would do:

-When you bring her out in a bikini and stripper stilettos right off the bat, the rest of the show is sort of anti-climactic. Build up some suspense! I would introduce the model and let her drive in normal clothes....maybe shorts or jeans and a tight t-shirt, and regular shoes. THEN, after the drive, have her change into the bikini and wash the car. That way the viewer has something to look forward to.

-in your editing, use more shots of the model driving, with the cam directly in front of her (mounted on the visor maybe?)....kind of how they use that in-car shot on Top Gear when they do the 'celebrity driving a reasonably priced car'. We want to see her reaction to the car. Have her act like she's enjoying it...a LOT, heh. The shots looking out the windshield, or from the passenger's perspective are kind of boring, IMHO.

-spend less time on the in-car instruction stuff. Maybe break up that monotony with some shots of the model talking about the car, her impressions, etc.

[TwentyValveB5+S4]

I swear I'm actually going to make it out one of these days... any shoots planned for 6/8?

[craiglieberman]

More on the girl driving, check, can do.

Have the girl talking? Challenging...many of these girls are shy on camera and we tried hearing their impressions, they'd always say "cute." I'll see what we can do.

It's so hard to find the optimum balance...at one point, it was going to be just music and girl driving. No narration, nothing.

Keep the comments coming. You guys ARE the target audience.

[craiglieberman]

[Bob W.]

I guess it's a tall order to ask for a girl who is: a) attractive, b) has a good personality, c)likes cars, and d) has the ability to talk about cars with some level of interest. Maybe script something out for them to discuss, I dunno.

[Bob W.]

[Reggie]

[mcb001982]